Two RIDICULOUS SENTENCES
in AmCon
recently
On the backs of immigrant workers, Henry Ford, the industrial innovator, changed fundamental American values by literally moving forward via technological advances and changes in factory strategies
On the backs of Chinese laborers and Thai hard-drive producers, Steve Jobs, a technological genius, changed America through creating a new world of technological innovations, fostering a community online with his products the benefits of which can be seen throughout the world.
in AmCon
recently
On the backs of immigrant workers, Henry Ford, the industrial innovator, changed fundamental American values by literally moving forward via technological advances and changes in factory strategies
On the backs of Chinese laborers and Thai hard-drive producers, Steve Jobs, a technological genius, changed America through creating a new world of technological innovations, fostering a community online with his products the benefits of which can be seen throughout the world.
So, how would you work these into a better, single sentence? LDL
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